Monday, March 23, 2009
Computer can not be compare to human brain
Computer has become an important thing in our daily life there are a lot of thing s in our life use computer such as for office needs until education needs. We as student usually use computer for doing our assignment and many other activity. Even though computer has makes incredible development today but computer cannot be compared to human brains, the human brain is more powerful than any computer in this world because our brain is more complex than the newest computer. It has been estimated that the information – processing capacity of even the most powerful supercomputer is equal to the nervous system of a snail – a tiny fraction of the power available to the supercomputer inside the human skull. The kinds of processing in a human brain and a computer are different, too, according to fact Computers find it easy to remember a 25- digit number but find it hard to summarize the gist of (children’s story) Little Red Riding Hood and humans find it hard to remember the number but easy to summarize the story .Both quotations are on page 64 of a magazine article titled “can a computer Be conscious? by Steven pinker. The article appeared on pages 63 – 65 of the news magazine U.S News & world report on August 18, 1997.
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After I read the writing above, for me, it seems as the same as others writing. He wrote it in a good way, and states the main idea in 3rd sentences,'our brain is more powerful than computer', it makes me curious to know, how come our brain can be more powerful and can't be compared to computer. if i see from the way he wrote those text, i can say that he wrote to convince the readers that our barin is more powerful than computer.the readers here, it can be all of the people in general way, any kids of people's backgrounds can read this writing. to convine the readers, the writer put a statement from Steven Pinker who wrote an article 'can a computer be conscious?'. Actually the writer can add some more details that contain facts from other research source to support more on the statement of Steven Pinker.then, the writer can put the supporting facts after the last line.but in this writing, there is one thing that i notice, about the openig sentence. i little bit disagree about the opening sentence "Computer has become an important thing in our daily life there are a lot of thing s in our life use computer such as for office needs until education needs", because in my opininon, the main idea,later more on "Computer has become an important thing in our daily life".probably the writer more focus on what will he writes, if he write the first sentence that Computer has become an important thing in our daily life, it means, he should describe a reason why computer become important. better he changes into others sentence. one more that i want to correct, still in the first line, it should be enclosed a punctuation after the word "life", and deleting the word "as", so, the sentence becomes
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